Are these rap lyrics good?

Yea u r using the word swag way to much. U should try to make up your own word be original. Also try not to use foul language so much. If you can make a "hard core rap" without cursing its makes your skills look 100 times better.(It is possible believe me) The foul language makes you look like you don't have much of a vocab. Try looking different words and meanings. That will give u a larger choice of words and give better bars because you'll have more words to rhyme with. But that's my opinion I am also a writer/rapper myself. GOOD LUCK!!